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can we get some Voice quotes? ie more hooks then a pirate convention, more crosses then the vatican, hes getting pounded harder then jenna haze. the voice fo sho!

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Start position:~ in guard on bottom

Commentary text: ~ has his hands clasped underneath ^'s neck, trying to choke out ^! ^ rolls around, trying to escape. He succeds in getting out of the guillotine but now ~ is on top in side control.

New position ~ in side control on top

 

Start position: ~ in guard on bottom

Commentary text: ~ has ^ caught in a guillotine and it looks pretty tight. ^ rolls, trying to escape. He gets out of it but now he's mounted!

New position ~ in mount on top

 

Start position: ~ in guard on bottom

Commentary text: ~ goes for a guillotine but it isn't very tight and ^ pops out his head and passes to half guard.

New position^ in half guard on top

 

Start position:^ in mount on top

Commentary text: ^ gets a hold of an arm and swivels for the armbar! ~ keeps his cool though and manages to escape. Now he's in ^'s guard

New position ~ in guard on top

 

Start position:~ in half guard on bottom

Commentary text: ~ has got ^ in a guillotine. He regains guard and tightens the choke. It looks like ^ might be out cold but he gives the ref the thumbs up and ~ gives up the choke.

New position ~ in guard on bottom

 

Start position:~ in half guard on bottom

Commentary text: ~ is looking for a guillotine. He wants to regain full guard but ^ pops his head out and passes to side control.

New position ^ in side control on top

 

Start position:~ in guard on bottom

Commentary text: ~'s looking for a guillotine choke but ^ has his arm in and ~ can't get enough pressure so he lets it go.

 

Start position:^ in half guard on top

Commentary text:^ scoring with some small hammerfists. Not very damaging though.

 

Start position:^ in mount on top

Commentary text:Vicious haymaker from the top. That one hurt ~.

 

Start position:^ in half guard on top

Commentary text:~ taking a lot of punishment from the top.

 

Start position:^ in guard on top

Commentary text:^'s looking to score some points with weak strikes to the body & head

 

Start position:^ in half guard on top

Commentary text:Not very scary ground and pound displayed by ^here but it's certainly scoring with the judges.

 

Start position:^ in side control on top

Commentary text:The referee watches closely as ~ eats a couple of nasty strikes.

 

Start position:^ in half guard on top

Commentary text:~ takes an elbow to the eye socket. That's gotta hurt.

 

Start position:^ in half guard on top

Commentary text:Some short but powerful punches from ^

 

Start position:^ in side control on top

Commentary text:Hammerfist, knee to the body combination from ^

 

Start position:^ in guard on top

Commentary text:~ defends against the ground and pound well but that elbow got through.

 

Start position:~ in guard on bottom

Commentary text:~ throwing some elbows from the bottom.

 

Start position:^ in mount on top

Commentary text:^ looks like he's playing a human bongo with these hammerfists.

 

Start position:^ in guard on top

Commentary text:The ref calls for action and ^ complies with a couple of short punches.

 

Start position:^ in side control on top

Commentary text:^'s works over his opponent with knees and elbows from side control.

 

Start position:^ in half guard on top

Commentary text:^'s clearly just looking to score points with these strikes 'cause they're anything but powerful.

 

Start position:^ in guard on top

Commentary text:These strikes from ^ seem to just be for show. Maybe he's looking for an opportunity to amp up the power

 

Start position:^ in guard on top

Commentary text:^'s trying to look busy by throwing some short punches.

 

Start position:^ in side control on top

Commentary text:Some brutal knee's from side control by ^. And a short hammerfist for good measure.

 

Start position:^ in side control on top

Commentary text:^ lands a succession of powerful strikes. ~'s face will be sore in the morning.

 

Start position:^ in mount on top

Commentary text:~'s getting beat up pretty bad here but he's hanging in there. For now.

 

Start position:^ in half guard on top

Commentary text:^'s corner eggs him on as he lands a couple of nasty punches.

 

Start position:^ in back mount on top

Commentary text:^ pretends to be a human backpack for a moment here.

 

Start position:^ in back mount on top

Commentary text:^ works the body triangle, trying to control the pace.

 

Start position:^ in side control on top

Commentary text:^ looks like he wished he could knee the head from here. Instead he settles for an elbow.

 

Start position:^ in mount on top

Commentary text:Bombs away! Nice ground and pound from the top by ^.

 

Start position:^ in half guard on top

Commentary text:^'s enjoying the warmth of his opponents body here. Either that or he's stalling.

 

Start position:^ in guard on top

Commentary text:If I didn't know anything about grappling I'd say that ^'s awkwardly snuggling his opponent right now.

 

Start position:~ in guard on bottom

Commentary text:~ clings to his opponent like a baby koala, looking to stall for a moment.

 

Start position:^ in guard on top

Commentary text:^ puts his hand over his opponents mouth, trying to interrupt his breathing.

 

Start position:^ in guard on top

Commentary text:^ throws a flurry of strikes but it just seems to annoy ~ rather than actually hurting him.

 

Start position:^ in guard on top

Commentary text:~'s in no particular danger of getting hurt by these strikes by ^.

 

Start position:^ in half guard on top

Commentary text:^'s displaying some fine dry humping here. I mean control. Yes, control..

 

Start position:^ in mount on top

Commentary text:^ takes his time and lands a couple of nice shots from the top.

 

Start position:^ in half guard on top

Commentary text:^ gets the rape choke for a short moment and lands a nice punch.

 

Start position:^ in side control on top

Commentary text:Some elbow to forehead action caused by ^

 

The fighters get a bit mixed up in the ropes but luckily there's an army of tiny men who push them back in.

 

Start position:^ in guard on top

Commentary text:That strike didn't connect as well as ^ would have wanted but it's better than nothing.

 

Start position:~ in half guard on bottom

Commentary text:^ takes some punishment from the bottom!

 

Start position:~ in half guard on bottom

Commentary text:~ dodges the ground and pound with some good head movement.

 

Start position:^ in mount on top

Commentary text:^'s treating ~'s head like a piñata with these strikes.

 

Start position:^ in guard on top

Commentary text:^ throws a couple of strikes that must have rattled ~'s skull real good.

 

Start position:^ in side control on top

Commentary text:No luck with that elbow from ^.

 

Start position:^ in side control on top

Commentary text:^ treats ~ like a human drumkit, beating him all over with strikes.

 

Start position:^ in side control on top

Commentary text:The crowd cries out for action and ^ responds with a couple of hammerfists

 

Start position:^ in mount on top

Commentary text:That blow really pounded ~'s head into the canvas.

 

Start position:^ in guard on top

Commentary text:^ connects with a big right hand from inside the guard

 

Start position:^ in mount on top

Commentary text:^ connects nicely with a right. He put his whole upper body into that one.

 

I was bored ok :P

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Start position: ~ in guard on bottom

Commentary Text: ~ traps ^ in the rubber guard for a moment and lands a decent elbow from the bottom before ^ breaks free and settles back in to guard.

 

Start position: ~ in side control on top

Commentary text: ~ lands a knee to the body and follows it up with a nasty elbow to the head as ^ tries to protect his ribs.

 

Start position: ~ in side control on bottom

Commentary text: ~ has his feet against the *. He's pushing off and he's flipped ^ over! Just like that ~ is on top in side control!

New position: ~ in side control on top

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Start position: ~ in guard on bottom

Commentary text: ~ is working the rubber guard, and it looks like he's going for an omoplata. ^'s arm is trapped and ooh! ~ works his shin up under ^s throat, looking for the gogoplata! That actually looks tight, can ~ finish it? Nope, ^ wriggles free and he's back in ~s guard. Lucky for ^, 'cause that would have been embarrassing.

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Start position: ~ in guard on top.

Commentary text: ~ works a couple of short hammerfists from inside the guard.

 

Start position: ~ in guard on top.

Commentary text: ~ lands a nice flurry inside ^'s guard.

 

Start position: ~ in guard on top.

Commentary text: ~ picks his shots carefully and lands a couple of good right hands.

 

Start position: ~ in guard on top.

Commentary text: ~ pushes ^ up against the * and lands some nice shots to the head and body.

 

Start position: ~ in half guard on top.

Commentary text: ~ looks to grind ^ down with a couple of shots to the head and body.

 

Start position: ~ in guard on top.

Commentary text:~ attempts to use a can opener to open up ^'s guard so he can pass but ^ defends it well.

 

Start position: ~ in side control on top.

Commentary text: ~ tries to submit ^ with a neck crank but ^ toughens it out.

 

Start position: ~ in guard on bottom.

Commentary text: ~ works some nice elbows from the bottom.

 

Start position: ~ in guard on bottom.

Commentary text: ~ has double wrist control and it looks like he's thinking about going for a submission.

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Start position: ~ in guard on top.

Commentary text: Holy cow, ~ cartwheeled over the guard of ^, landing in side control!

New position: ~ in side control on top.

 

Start position: ~ in guard on top.

Commentary text: Scrambling like my eggs in the morning, ~ has managed to pass into half guard before ^ can control him again.

New position: ~ in half guard on top.

 

Start position: ~ in half guard on top.

Commentary text: It looks like ~ has trapped ^'s arm under ~'s leg, giving ~ the opportunity to drop some uncontested elbows. ^ has now freed his arm but his face must be smarting!

 

Start position: ~ in mount on top.

Commentary text: ^ is trying to escape the mount, he has turned over and is trying to stand up, ~ knows an opportunity when he sees one and takes the back.

New position: ~ in back control on top.

 

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Punch Pass

Start position: ~ in guard on top.

End position: ~ in half-guard on top.

Commentary text: ~ feigns unloading with a big right hand, while ^ was covering up for the punch ~ took the opportunity to slide his way into half guard!

 

 

Omoplata Standup

Start position: ~ in guard on the bottom.

End position: Both fighters standing.

Commentary text: ~ is trying to secure on Omoplata on ^s right arm, ^ is doing a good job defending the arm but ~ has scooted his hips out, he twists himself free and stands up gesturing for his opponent to rise. With some prompting from the referee ^ gets back to his feet.

 

 

Crossface & Successful Ground and Pound

Start position: ~ in mount on top.

End position: position unchanged.

Commentary text: ^ is trying keep his shoulders off the mat and pull ~ down to control his posture here, ~ pushes ^ back down with a crossface before unloading a couple of strong right hands.

Note: This could probably be done from Half Guard too. It's meant to be ~ landing ground and pound successfully, I guess it could also be ^ trying to control and ~ countering with ground and pound.

 

 

Other Successful Ground and Pound

Start position: ~ in guard on top.

End position: position unchanged.

Commentary text: ~ digs a couple of right hands to the body before posturing up and throwing a flurry of strikes to ^s head with mixed success.

 

Start position: ~ in side control on top.

End position: position unchanged.

Commentary text: ~ scores with an elbow right to the eye socket, ^ blinks - probably trying to get his vision back.

 

Start position: ~ in back mount on top.

End position: position unchanged.

Commentary text: ~ lands some good right hands under the armpit of ^ here, trying to soften him up for a choke!

 

Start position: ~ in guard on top.

End position: position unchanged.

Commentary text: ~ is being controlled by ^ here however he's still doing damage by clapping ^s ears, that has got to sting!

 

 

 

Failed Ground and Pound

Start position: ~ in guard on top.

End position: position unchanged.

Commentary text: ~ tries to posture up in order to land some strikes but ^ keeps control of his posture for now.

 

Start position: ~ in back mount on top.

End position: position unchanged.

Commentary text: ~ tries to land a big right hand under the armpit of ^ here, based on the sound though he hit nothing but ^s elbow - ouch!

 

Start position: ~ in mount on top.

End position: position unchanged.

Commentary text: ~ unleashes a huge flurry of strikes from the mount here, ^ was prepared though and blocked them with his forearms - great defense displayed by ^ there.

 

 

 

Positional Control

Start position: ~ in guard on the bottom.

End position: position unchanged.

Commentary text: ~ utilizing a closed guard to good effect here as he controls his opponents posture.

 

Start position: ~ in half guard on top.

End position: position unchanged.

Commentary text: ~ is pressing ^s head down to the mat with a crossface here, maybe he'll look to take advantage of this situation with some ground and pound.

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Start position: ~ in Sprawl on top.

Commentary text: ~ tries to transition to Over under, but he's left his arm open here. ^ grabs the arm and uses the momentum to reverse the position. He's now in ~'s half guard Nice move by ^!

New position: ^ in half guard on top.

 

 

Start position: ^ in Guard on top

Commentary text: ~ looking for submissions here and he throws his leg's up, ^ shakes his head and throws ~'s legs to the side and procceds to pass to side control , great move by ^.

New position: ^ in side control on top

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^ with a big left elbow that lands square on the jaw of ~ , he's firing off shots on ~ here , ~ is hurting now!

^ fires a huge Left that Slams off the mat , Ouch i hope thats not a broken hand!

 

 

end position , ^ half guard top

start position ^ half guard Top

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Start position: ~ in side control on top.

Commentary text: ~ attempts to isolate an arm for a kimura from side control, but ^ is able to wriggle free after ~'s pummeling for leverage goes awry.

New position: ^ in ~'s guard.

 

Start position: ~ in guard.

Commentary text: ^ is aggressively looking for submissions- he has the framework for an arm triangle set! However ~ postures up enough to get some space and hops to side control. Not exactly glamorous, but it works.

New position: ~ in side control on top.

 

Start position: ~ in guard, bottom.

Commentary text: ^ is trying to ground and pound from the top, but ~ is doing a good job of breaking down his posture... ~ shifts his hips, gets the sweep! Impressive work.

New position: ~ in full mount.

 

Start position: ~ in guard, top.

Commentary text: ^ trying to pull out a lot of techniques that he doesn't particularly know how to do- he tries to grab his foot for rubber guard but forgets to secure ~'s arms. ~ arm punches ^ in the nose and starts working for an Americana and ^ is forced to relinquish the hold- ~ takes the opportunity to advance position and gets a knee on the chest!

New position: ~ with knee on chest/~ in full mount.

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Start position: ~ in guard bottom

Commentary text: ~ Working with hips, looking for Triangle. ^ Tries to sit back to avoid...but ~ Locked it! He tries to choke him...and now add elbows to the top of the had! And ^ has enough! He tapped!

New position: ~ Winner by submission (Triangle Choke)

 

Start position: ~ in guard bottom

Commentary text: ~ is working his way out of it, looking to go under ^'s arm...and he did! Beatiful transition - right to his opponent's back!

New position: ~ back mount.

 

Something like that -

 

Start position: ~ in guard bottom

Commentary text: ~ is working his way out of it, looking to go under ^'s arm...and he did! Beatiful transition - right to his opponent's back!

New position: ~ back mount.

 

And one more thing - what about submissions in stand up? Like:

 

Start position: Clinch

Commentary text: ~ tries to move a little bit...he duck under hook in clinch, and take ^'s back! What he tries...Standing Rear Naked Choke! Can he finish it...yes! He's tapping! What a finish!

New position: ~ winner by Submission (Standing Rear Naked Choke)

 

Start position: clinch

Commentary text: ~ is very active in clinch, he controls his opponent's wrist...and jumpes! Flying Armbar attempt! Qucik movement from him, no ^ needs to escape, and escape quickly or...he tapped! ~ extended his arm nicely, and force ^ to tap!

New position: ~ winner by Submission (Flying Armbar)

 

Start position: clinch

Commentary text: They scramble again the clinch, looking to do something...^ goes lower, to try go down...and ~ caught his neck! He jumped on his hips, trying to finish it with Flying Guilotine...it looks tight...^ tries to fight his way out fo it...but can't! Ref jumps in to break it, when ^ tapped! Text-book Guilotine Choke!

New position: ~ winner by Submission (Flying Guilotine)

 

What about that? :)

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For a failed GnP attempt

Start position: ~ in guard on top

Commentary text: ^ switches briefly to rubber-guard to prevent the ground and pound.

New position: ~ in guard on top (unchanged)

 

Failed sub attempt

Start position: ~ in guard on bottom

Commentary text: ~ shrimps out and kicks his leg over, he's fishing for an omoplata, this close to the * he probably dosnt have the room to finish it.... and ^ has worked his arm free and bases out securing his side control.

New position: ^ on top, side control.

 

Top position stalling

Start position: ~ on top in side control

Commentary text: ~ securing head and arm control, he looks happy to take his time from here.

New position: ~ on top in side control (unchanged)

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For a failed GnP attempt

Start position: ~ in guard on top

Commentary text: ^ switches briefly to rubber-guard to prevent the ground and pound.

New position: ~ in guard on top (unchanged)

 

Failed sub attempt

Start position: ~ in guard on bottom

Commentary text: ~ shrimps out and kicks his leg over, he's fishing for an omoplata, this close to the * he probably dosnt have the room to finish it.... and ^ has worked his arm free and bases out securing his side control.

New position: ^ on top, side control.

 

Top position stalling

Start position: ~ on top in side control

Commentary text: ~ securing head and arm control, he looks happy to take his time from here.

New position: ~ on top in side control (unchanged)

 

 

WOW! i loved it. using words like basing out, shrimping could def be used more i think. but the term "kicks his leg over" could be easily misinterpreted by foreign languages maybe? i really liked how it sounded tho. made me mentally paint a picture of a realistic grappling scene and thats what i think were after.

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Sweeps

Start position: ~ on bottom half guard.

Commentary text: ~ snaps ^ up from lockdown, reaches under for a leg and rolls ^ over, beautiful sweep.

New position: ~ on top half guard

 

Start position: ~ on bottom half guard.

Commentary text: ~ with the whip up, ^ keeping a good base. ~ cups ^'s knee and rolls for an electric chair sweep. ~ releases his lockdown, pushes ^'s trapped leg to the side and effortlessly slides into sidecontrol, ^ clearly didnt train for that one.

New position: ~ on top sidecontrol

 

 

Failed GnP

Start position: ~ on Top, Guard or half Guard

Commentary text: ^ breaks ~'s posture with double underhooks and avoids any real damage from strikes.

New position: unchanged

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Some Rory MacDonald-esque ground nd pound:

 

Starting position: ~ on top in guard

Commentary text: ~ is able posture up from guard. He immediately rifles off powerful punches to ^'s face with marksman accuracy.

End position: no change

 

Starting position: ~ on top in guard

Commentary: ~ is able to stand up in ^'s guard. ~ fires off a powerful combination with precision as he works himself back into ^s guard.

End position no change.

 

Starting position: ~ on top in half guard

Text: ~ uses one arm as a measuring stick and the other to crack ^ with a beautiful elbow.

End position: no change.

 

Starting position: ~ on top in side control

Text: ~ traps ^'s arm with his knee and manages to land a couple of elbows before ^ is able to free his arm from under ~.

End position: no change.

 

Starting position: ~on top in full mount

Text: ~ unloading with punches to the face of ^.

End position: no change

 

Failed ground and pound

 

Startng position: ~ in full mount

Text: ~ is loading up for a big punch and waiting for ^ to make one wrong move. The crowd cheers anticipating a big bomb. ^ is covering up well though and ~ decides to abandon the punch in order maintain control.

End position: no change

 

Starting position: ~ on top in back mount

Text: ~ loads up for a big punch from behind and waits for ^ to make one wrong move. The crowd cheers in anticipation for a big bomb. But ~ can't control effectively with one arm and ^ wiggles his way back to mount. ~ abandons the punch and is now controlling from mount.

End position: ~ on top in full mount

 

Guard pass

 

Start: ~ on top, guard

Text: ~ postures up for ^'s guard and grabs onto ^'s ankles. He pushes ^'s ankles one way and throws them the other way. ~ lands in side control. Beautiful pass by ~.

End position: ~ on top, side control.

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Start position: ~ Half guard top

Text: ~ digs his elbow into ^ ribs ooohh ~ switches his weight and batters ^ with an elbow to the face.

End position: ~ half guard top

 

Start position: Full guard top

Text: ~ is stalling, I think he wants the ref to stand him up... I think the ref is goi.... BBBAAAMM ~ unloads with two massive swings that almost takes ^ head off.

End position: ~ Full guard top

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