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MMATycoon Court: Karter vs Camara


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  1. 1. Does Karter owe Camara 5 mil?

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Talk about owned.

 

Karter youre a savage hahaha I love it.

 

Camara is hiding from his computer right now texting his POWERFULLL FRENS asking them what to do, and the answer is avoid and deny like usual right Camara LO Fucking L.

 

Stone cold facts right in front of you, the whole community knows how bad of a fraud you are.

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just because I'm a good sport...

 

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Lil Savage, he might be a faggot
Talkin' bout my ass just might get his ass kicked
Kidnap his mom, golden shower in a cabin
Beat her with my wood till my dick goes flaccid
ayyyyyyy
let a real ninja at it
I see you on sight my aim is automatic
Better tip toe past me
Murder is a habit
Run up in ya crib and show you what a savage - like
yeah I live that life
put me in a cage and I'm still gon fight
stood in the paint and I beat life twice
put me in a movie I'm the bad guy type - like why?
"Why you live like that?"
I never had shit so why hold back
spoiled rich kids with a brand new bag
I took their shit and I don't feel bad
U Mad?
I'ma pull a Jacky Chan
Got the mod in my pocket
I'll never get a ban
there were a few more lines about Castor joining the clan or something like that but I butchered it so this is all I got for lil savage today lol

 

tbh your lyrics aren't bad, you are really only rhyming 2 syllables though. You can tell you don't rap a lot because there isn't any real feeling to your vocals and I really just don't like accapella rap, I am sure it would sound better with a beat. I mean I wasn't planning on it, especially since my lap top won't stay on for more than a half hour at a time but I can show you how to keep the dice rolling on that thing you just did right there. But tbh I like it. A lot of people can't even hardly rhyme 1 syllable. I am a bit aggressive when I rap. I think your verse would sound great with a little more oomph in your vocals.

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Ugh, can't wait for Autumn got

a lot of shit to drop, a lot of shit to talk

a team full of autobots

about to beat you out yo socks,

you fuckin suck, just kick some rocks,

you chick she suck my otter pop,

 

Treat her like she octamom,

she conquer dong,

can hardly breath in oxi-gon(spelled wrong on purpose lol)

she off my top, all day long, n that's the drop,

 

whip cream, six speed, the car don't stop,

I'm really in this bitch

it doesn't seem that you can walk the walk,

 

I hear an aweful lot of aweful talk,

it got me thinking aweful thoughts,

I spit that fire that make you stop n drop,

and roll around a lot,

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I'm nasty cut yo peoples open,

leave em leakin soakin

and nah, I aint even sober

drinkin since this mornin

 

Ima beast, eat the beat it's over

pistol inda holster,

ya'll simpletons I need ta show ya

y'all ain't even soldiers

 

kickin this shit, gettin nasty,

bin in this bitch, ima king, like alladin

shoot a fuckin mac eleven if you wanna get it witta savage,

 

Disintegrate yo fuckin cytoskeleton,

bin in this thang, but ho I'm not well again,

my mind on elephant

bin fly no pelican

a psycho tellin it,

I write so elegant,

 

Bin drinkin it, sippin it, ice cold,

king in this shit, this is my throne,

my dingling swingin like ty-sone

on top of the world, this is my home,

 

 

If you look close I am doing a lot of "internal rhymes" not only am I rhyming the main rhyme but I have a lot of rhymes inside of the main rhyme.

 

I also have lines like "drinkin it, sippin it, Ice cold... King in this, shit it is my throne... I am rhyming full sentences. that is an 8 syllable rhyme that I wrote in seconds. I been doing this for almost 10 years and I have over 10,000 followers for my music. I write on the daily and have gotten payed for my written lyrics and payed to be on stage.

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I'm nasty cut yo peoples open,

leave em leakin soakin

and nah, I aint even sober

drinkin since this mornin

 

Ima beast, eat the beat it's over

pistol inda holster,

ya'll simpletons I need ta show ya

y'all ain't even soldiers

 

kickin this shit, gettin nasty,

bin in this bitch, ima king, like alladin

shoot a fuckin mac eleven if you wanna get it witta savage,

 

Disintegrate yo fuckin cytoskeleton,

bin in this thang, but ho I'm not well again,

my mind on elephant

bin fly no pelican

a psycho tellin it,

I write so elegant,

 

Bin drinkin it, sippin it, ice cold,

king in this shit, this is my throne,

my dingling swingin like ty-sone

on top of the world, this is my home,

 

 

If you look close I am doing a lot of "internal rhymes" not only am I rhyming the main rhyme but I have a lot of rhymes inside of the main rhyme.

 

I also have lines like "drinkin it, sippin it, Ice cold... King in this, shit it is my throne... I am rhyming full sentences. that is an 8 syllable rhyme that I wrote in seconds. I been doing this for almost 10 years and I have over 10,000 followers for my music. I write on the daily and have gotten payed for my written lyrics and payed to be on stage.

but your making shit up - it barely makes sense.

 

Treat her like she octamom,

she conquer dong,

can hardly breath in oxi-gon = what in the actual fuck does any of that mean.

bin in this bitch, ima king, like alladin - alladin was a prince.

my mind on elephant

bin fly no pelican - thats just made up shit that sounds alike?

In all honesty, I can do no better. However, I have been a fan of hip hop for over 20 years and I know dog shit when i see it...

CK's lyrics have substance and meaning - your just picking out words that sound the same and trying to crowbar a rhyming scheme together.

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Things don't need to make sense, be topical, etc when the rhymin so nice.

 

I remember when Clydebankblitz or whatever his name was tried the same thing vs Kenlow and received a similarly cold reception.

 

Honestly, no one cares about your rhyming scheme, just make it funny, on topic or at least relevant to the game.

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Lining up fights seems to go decent, but what is up with Camara his rap...?

he can't rap.

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And his singing is out of rythm, dont forgrt to add that. It really bothers me lol.

There are free metornome apps. Just download a Pozzoli pdf and try it for about 2 months with a metronome and this should improve a lot

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head high, chest out

bell just rang so he's going down

step left, hook right

bitch now bleeding from his eye

seeing stars painted red

call the whambulance

this bitch be dead

he sit'n face down, ass up

just the way I just fucked yo slut.

 

I'm def no rapper, but I could do shit like that all day. But don't worry, I won't put y'all through that misery.

 

:band:

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We ought to start a shitty tycoon rap group. I can edit vocals.. I suck at making beats (something I never got good at) but we can do shit for fun and use free non profit you tube beats lmfao sorry i'm bored and that sounds like fun. haha

 

Absolutely.

 

Blake is interested and Kenflo has a song out there too: "Sticky Situation". I looked everywhere for it but cannot find it anymore :(

 

I love having a real rapper in Team Camara. I have been BLESSED I swear, somehow lady luck always smiles upon meh. If you enjoy rapping and want to rap about Tycoon stuff let`s do eet. I can post ideas and we can come up with the sickest Tycoon rap ever!

 

On other topics: CK One of my POWERFUL Syndicate homies is washing my dirty underwear, it`s so dirty we defo gonna squeeze your 500k , he looks like this so you just be patient.

 

http://www.mmatycoon.com/images/manager_avatars/1251846928avatar.jpg

 

messy-laundry-570.jpg

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there was only one real rapper in MMA Tycoon and he was never on Team Camara but I've retired from Hip Hop, I make bad Acoustic Covers these days.

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What's the hold up lads, is this last fight actually going to happen?

 

Trump + Inferno are ready. Trump is already at the org so just waiting for Karter to sign his guy over.

 

http://www.mmatycoon.com/fighterprofilemanager.php?FID=330872

 

Wrote to Jordan a few times but he doesn`t want to get involved in any drama so he won`t be giving us any details (or the play-by-play) about contracts sent or anything he told me to just manage getting Karter to the fight that he would do what is necessary (meaning sending him the fight contract + bookings).

 

So I am guessing Mister Karter has an Inferno 1-fight contract in is mailbox but cannot confirm.

 

Red has been active though so we know he is reading this. I am ready whenever. I know Karter just lost 5M to Skenoj doing some MMA bets not sure if he busted his roll to be honest.

 

http://www.mmatycoon.com/fighterprofilepublic.php?FID=332331

 

Camp Camara is ready.

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