Groundwork commentary (TKO/KO or sub)

[Eveas]

Start position: ~ in guard on top.

Commentary text: ~ cannot break the closed guard, so he is clinching around ^'s lower back and bracing his legs as if he plans to slam ^ into breaking his grip. They are up and ~ is sliding his head into the center of ^'s chest and pushing down as he tucks in ^'s lower back? He isn't going for a slam at all. ^ is tapping frantically to what is essentially a bear hug! Using his head is what really put the pressure on ^'s lower back. We have a winner.

Winner: ~ (aggressor)

Winning move text: Submission (Bear Hug)

 

Start position: ~ in half guard on bottom.

Commentary text: ~ is pushing down on ^'s shoulders to create distance and backs up against the *. ~ hooks ^'s right leg with his inside heel and reaches over ^'s back the grab his left leg. He is pulling hard using his elbow as a fulcrum. Can he get it? ~ rolls back throwing the leg behind his head! Spladle!!! ~ leans his head back as hard as he can splitting ^'s legs apart! The ref jumped in to stop the fight? It was a verbal tap! ^ is rolling with his hands between his legs in pain.

Winner: ~ (aggressor)

Winning move text: Submission (Spladle)

 

Start position: ~ in half guard on bottom.

Commentary text: ~ is pushing down on ^'s shoulders to create distance and backs up against the *. ~ hooks ^'s right leg with his inside heel and reaches over ^'s back the grab his left leg. ~ rolls back into a spladle. The leg isn't behind his head to get the full torque, but ~ is raining down punches with his free right hand. ^ is helpless in this position and the ref jumps in to save him.

Winner: ~ (aggressor)

Winning move text: TKO (Strikes)

 

Start position: ~ in rear mount on top.

Commentary text: ~ hooks ^'s foot with his leg and reaches under to grab a lock on his neck. He cranks down hard rolling ^ onto his shoulders pinning him down with the leg still trapped. It's the old ball and chain! ~ is laying his weight down and freeing one hand up to drop bombs. ^ finally manages to roll through, but ~ is still standing over him unloading all he has. The ref dives in to pull ~ off! ~ jumped on the * and is flexing for his fans.

Winner: ~ (aggressor)

Winning move text: TKO (Strikes)

[Guest]

Start position: ~ in guard bottom

Commentary text: ^ catches ~arms and toss up his legs around his head, Looks like ^ trying for a triangle choke. Doesn't seem like ^ got it on...OH! ^ locks the submissions and ~ is forced to taps quickly as ^ throws his arms in victory!!

Winner: ^ (Counter)

Winning move text: Submission ( Triangle Choke )

[Guest]

Start position: ~ in Back Mount

Commentary text: ~ has the back mount and tries to lock in the choke but ^ is trying to fight back. Their he goes not much of a struggle from ^ as ~ put him to sleep! Ladies and Gentleman ^ is "Out like a baby!"

Winner: ~ (aggressor)

Winning move text: Submission ( RNC )

[Note]

Start position: ~ in guard on top.

Commentary text: ~ tries to pass the guard but ^'s got a hold of an arm and sinches up a triangle! ~ trashes around as he tries to pop his head free but ^ just locks it up even tighter, forcing ~ to tap out!

Winner: ^ (counter)

Winning move text: Submission (Triangle Choke)

 

Start position: ^ in guard on top.

Commentary text: ~'s working a high guard. He grabs a hold of his own shin and goes for a Gogoplata! Can he get it? Both fighters struggle but ~ manages to force his shin underneath ^'s chin! This might be the end! - ~ pulls down the head and ^ taps out! Wooooooow, that was crazy! Awesome finish!

Winner: ~ (aggressor)

Winning move text: Submission (Gogoplata)

[Guest]

Start position: ~ in guard on top.

Commentary text: ~ puts his arm over ^ eyes to prepare for a massive hammer. As ~ moves his arm away, he manages to thump ^ head all the way to tomorrow! Lights Out! ~ is the winner!

Winner: ~ (aggressor)

Winning move text: KO (GnP)

[Note]

Start position: ~ in guard on top.

Commentary text: ~ postures up for some ground and pound but ^ uses the opening to get a hip out and grab a hold of an arm! He's looking to lock up a kimura from the guard! - ^ quickly scoots his hips out to the side and cranks the arm, forcing ~ to tap out!

Winner: ^ (counter)

Winning move text: Submission (Kimura)

[Note]

Start position: ~ in side control on top.

Commentary text: ~'s working on isolating an arm. ^ recognizes the danger and tries to keep his arm close to his body but ~ yanks it out and goes for a straight armbar! This could end badly for ^! - ~ gets the arm straightened out and ^ taps out!

Winner: ~ (aggressor)

Winning move text: Submission (Straight Armbar)

 

 

Start position: ~ in half guard on top.

Commentary text: ^ better be careful here, as ~ has managed to isolate an arm. - ~ seems to be going for a Kimura but I don't think he can get enough leverage from the half guard. - Oh but now he's switched to a straight armbar and ^ seems to be in a lot of pain! He taps! The fight is over!

Winner: ~ (aggressor)

Winning move text: Submission (Straight Armbar)

[Guest]

Start position: ~ is in back mount on bottom

Commentary text: ~ is trying to slip out the back door and escape to his feet, but at the last second ^ locks on a reverse triangle from the back! ^ rolls ~ over on to the trapped arm... and there's the tap! Highlight reel submission by ^!

Winner: ^ (Counter)

Winning move text: Submission (Reverse Triangle)

 

Start position: ~ in half guard on top

Commentary text: ~ is trying to stand up from the half guard, but ^ keeps control of his leg and drops back for the heel hook! ^ cranks it hard and the ref steps in as ~ screams in pain! ~ is still grimacing and holding his knee as ^ stomps around the ring in celebration!

Winner: ^ (Counter)

Winning move text: Submission (Heel Hook)

 

Start position: ~ in mount on top

Commentary text: ~ gets control of ^'s wrist and swings to the side for the armbar. It looks deep but ^ isn't tapping! ~ is grimacing as he gives it everything here. The arm is horribly hyperextended and ^ finally taps out to prevent it from snapping! That was horrifying, let's see a replay.

Winner: ~ (aggressor)

Winning move text: Submission (Armbar)

[Note]

Start position: ~ in side control on top.

Commentary text: ~'s working on a kimura. He's stepped over the head but ^ proves to be a slippery customer and ~ might have to give up the attempt. - Oh but now he swivels for an armbar instead! And he's got it! ^ taps! Beautiful technique!

Winner: ~ (aggressor)

Winning move text: Submission (Armbar)

 

Start position: ~ in guard on top.

Commentary text: ~ scrambles back to his feet but he's left his leg in the party and ^ latches on to it and catches ~'s heel! ~ tries desperately to kick his foot out of ^'s armpit but it's in deep! - ^ arches back and ~ screams in pain as his ankle gets bent at a horrific angle! - Ouch, let's hope he hasn't sustained any permanent damage.

Winner: ^ (counter)

Winning move text: Submission (Achilles Lock)

 

 

Start position: ~ in mount on top

Commentary text: ~ gets control of ^'s wrist and swings to the side for the armbar. It looks deep but ^ isn't tapping! ~ is grimacing as he gives it everything here - OH! The arm snaps and the referee calls the fight! That was horrifying, let's see that replay.

Winner: ~ (aggressor)

Winning move text: Submission (Armbar)

 

It's best not to write about arms snapping and such as you could end up reading that and then having your fighter end up with a whooping 3 day injury.

[Guest]

It's best not to write about arms snapping and such as you could end up reading that and then having your fighter end up with a whooping 3 day injury.

 

Ah, good point.

[Guest]

Start Position: ~ in guard on bottom

Commentary Text: ~ sneaks his leg past ^'s arm and locks on a triangle. That looks tight... is this one over? ~ suddenly scrambles to his feet, letting his unconscious opponent flop to the mat! The ref looks down at ^ and signals the official end of the bout, but ~ is already standing on the * celebrating with the crowd.

Winner: ~

Winning Move Text: Submission (Triangle Choke)

 

Start Position: ~ has given up his back

Commentary Text: ~ is aggressively trying to escape this bad position and get to his feet. He breaks loose for an instant but there's a scramble and ^ swings around to lock up a rear naked choke on his standing opponent! ~ stays upright and fights it for as long as he can, but his legs are getting unsteady and he's forced to tap out! Great awareness shown by ^ there, anticipating his opponent and capitalizing on a mistake.

Winner: ^ (counter)

Winning Move Text: Submission (Standing RNC)

[Guest]

Commentary text: He's holding him tight like a teddy bear here. This fighter is showing that he has immense strength as he shows his opponent some love! What's this? ^ has just slumped to the floor unconscious! Well this really puts a new meaning to squeezing the life out of someone!

 

Winning move text: Submission (Bear Hug)

 

 

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o how I wish this could be added as a submission!

[Note]

Start position: ~ in back mount on top

Commentary text: ~ thuds a couple heel strikes into ^'s abdomen. ^ moves an arm down to block but soon realises his mistake as ~ quickly locks up the rear naked choke! ^ gargles and starts turning purple before tapping out, putting an end to this contest!

Winner: ~ (aggressor)

Winning move text: Submission (RNC)

[Note]

Start position: ~ in mount on top.

Commentary text: ~ is picking his shots here, trying to make them count. He nails ^ with a thunderous right hand and ^ goes off to visit the land of wind and ghosts! He's knocked out cold, putting a definite end to this contest!

Winner: ~ (aggressor)

Winning move text: KO (Punch)

 

Start position: ~ in side control on top.

Commentary text: ~ lands some big power punches from side control and ^ has curled into a ball! ~ starts bombing away and the ref calls for ^ to improve position but instead he taps out under the strikes!

Winner: ~ (aggressor)

Winning move text: Submission (Strikes)

 

Start position: ~ in mount on top.

Commentary text: ~ lands flush with some big strikes from the dominant position and ^ is out! He's completely gone! ^ just got demolished like he was hit by a wrecking ball!

Winner: ~ (aggressor)

Winning move text: KO (Strikes)

 

Start position: ~ in side control on top.

Commentary text: ^ is feeling the effects of those biiiig shots just landed by ~! He's trying to cover up but ~ is intent on putting him away! The ref watches closely and decides to save ^ as the beating was just getting more brutal for every passing second!

Winner: ~ (aggressor)

Winning move text: TKO (Strikes)

 

Start position: ~ in mount on top.

Commentary text: ~ gives ^ a little boom-boom-boom from the mount and ^ is clearly hurt. He attempts to cover up but ~ is just brutalizing him with punches and this fight is in danger of being stopped! ~ shows no signs of being able to escape the beatdown and the ref decides that enough is enough!

Winner: ~ (aggressor)

Winning move text: TKO (Punches)

 

Start position: ~ in mount on top.

Commentary text: ~ is giving the people what they want with these brutal shots! ^ takes them right on the chin and goes out! ~ is walking home with a big KO victory tonight!

Winner: ~ (aggressor)

Winning move text: KO (Punches)

[Guest]

start postition : ~ full mount

commentary text: ~ is in a brilliant position here ^ lifts his head to avoid ground and pound but ~ catches him in a guillotine choke this could be over it is ^ is not moving we hope he is ok

winner:~ (aggressor)

winning move text : submission (choke)

[Eveas]

Start position: ~ in rear mount on top.

Commentary text: ~ is looking for a choke, but ^ is defending well. ^ is reaching out to give the crowd a thumbs up. What is with that goofy smile? ~ sunk in the choke and ^ is tapping like a mad man! This fight is over!!!

Winner: ~ (aggressor)

Winning move text: Submission (RNC)

[Guest]

start position-ground bottom

commentary text ~ is working a rubber guard here, he slips a leg under ^ neck and pops his leg out and around and squeezes like a anaconda and ^ is out!! He did not even get a chance to tap, man that was fast.

Winner: ~ (aggressor)

Winning move text: Submission (Gogoplata)

[Caleb613]

Format

 

Start position: ~ in guard on bottom

Commentary text: ~ is shifting onto his hips here, he's got a good grip on ^ 's arm! What's he doing here? wow look at the way he's wrapping his legs around the head and neck of his opponent! he's locked it in , what a gogoplata, and now look at him raining 12 to 6 elbows from the bottom look at ^ tapping like mad! What a finish!

Winner: ~ (Figher on the bottom)

Winning move text: Submission (Strikes and Gogoplata) or TKO (Gogoplata with Elbows) or (ONLY VS FIGHTERS WITH BIG HEARTS WHO ARE CONFIDENT[hidden]) Referee stoppage, Choke (Gogoplata and strikes)

 

 

 

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Start Position : ~ in Back mount (bottom)

Commentary Text : ^ has a good position here with the back mount and he's trying to rain down heavy shots, he misses with a big left hook and it looks like ~ has a hold of his arm , whats this? he's rolled him over and look at him cranking that arm WOW! he's locked on the Submission and ^ is tapping like theres no tommorow.

Winner: ~ (fighter on bottom)

Winning Move text: Submission (Kimura) or Submission (Americana)

[Caleb613]

Starting Position:Guard Bottom / mount top / Half guard bottom / half guard top

Move name : Guillotine Choke

SUBMISSION(GUILLOTINE CHOKE)

 

Commentary:-

 

~ is looking for a guillotine choke here and he's got his arms around ^'s neck! ^ is not defending it well and ~ has tightened it up! This could be it all over! ^ refuses to tap here but his body has gone limp and his face is going purple! The referee Pulls ~ off him and This is allllll Ovvveerrrr!

What a brutal choke, A trickle of blood came out of ^ nose as his head slammed off the floor. That is naaaasty!

[Caleb613]

Start position: ~ in guard on bottom.

Commentary text: ~ Trying to lock up the arm here for a kimura , switching his hips nicely there , ^ uses his head to escape but leaves his neck there , ~ has locked on a Marcelotine here! wow , great homage to the great Marcelo Garcia in this one , ^ is trying to hold his breath here but ~ has locked it in tighter and ^ is out cold! Superb Jiu Jitsu Performance there

Winner: ~ (aggressor)

Winning move text: Submission (Marcelotine) or KO (Submission)

[Guest]

Start position - Standing

(The guy who wins ill refer as #1 and the other #2)

Both fighters are swinging for the fences but #2 goes for a uppercut. #1 moves back and pounces on him for the takedown,#1 is raining down with thunderous blows.#1 elbows #2 and #2 is bearly covering up.#1 decides to rain down with 2 elbows and leaves #2 in a world of his own with no guard,#1 starts punching but then the ref drags #1 off #2

 

Winner - TKO (Strikes)

[Caleb613]

Format e.g.

Start position: ~ has took the back

Commentary text: ~ smacks ^ with a big Flurry of punches to the side of the head and ^ stops protectiong his neck and throws up his hands to block the punches, whats this? ~ isn't going for the RNC! he's released the hooks and grabbed his neck for a guillot-i- nooo! he's swung a leg over his neck! PERUVIAN NECKTIE!!! wow look at ^'s face go red like a Chameleon , RED-PURPLE-BLUE-TURQUIOSE and Release! the ref charges in and ^ Vommits as he comes round , what a beating! Superb Victory from ~

Winner: ~ (aggressor)

Winning move text: Submission(Peruvian Neck Tie)

[Caleb613]

Starting Position Side Control

 

^ Punches ~ with a ton of force , what a hook to the nose , Kaaay ooo

[Note]

Start position: ~ in guard on top.

Commentary text: ~ stands over ^, holding ^'s legs. He throws them to the side and dives in with a huge punch that hits ^ straight on the jaw! It knocks ^ out cold!

Winner: ~ (aggressor)

Winning move text: KO (Punch)

 

Start position: ^ in half guard on top

Commentary text:~ tries a deep half guard sweep but he's left his neck exposed and ^ has latched on to it, looking for a Brabo choke. He seems to have it all wrapped up nicely, this could very well be over. - Yep, ~ taps out! Splendid counter-grappling shown there by ^!

Winner: ^ (counter)

Winning move text: Submission (Brabo choke)

 

Start position: ~ in side control on top.

Commentary text:~ bounces ^'s head of the canvas with a massive right hand and ^ is hurt bad! - He turns to his side and covers up as ~ starts hammering away! The ref watches closely and decides to dive in, ending the fight!

Winner: ~ (aggressor)

Winning move text: TKO (Strikes)

[Guest]

kneebar template going to do more later on

 

 

Start position: ^ guard bottom

Commentary text:~ postures up and is working hard to break the guard. ^ opens up his guard, perhaps trying to work a submission. ~ tries to pass into half guard but ^ quickly switches into what looks like a very tight kneebar! ~ is struggling very hard and has a grimacing look on his face. ~ has the leg fully extended! ^ screams at the top of his lungs as the ref dives in and saves him from any further damage.

Winner: ^ (counter)

Winning Text Move: Submission (Kneebar)